Laughter
She lightly
sniggered innocently
at something on her phone
chuckling it gathered momentum
rippling through the carriage before
tumbling roughly into full blown hysteria
and hooking into strangers webbing them
together in a delicious yanking of lips chortling
shrugging in embarrassed hiccups of happy disbelief
at the stupidity of it all and wafting infectiously into even
the steeliest ones who despite themselves just like all others could
not resist this childish cacophonous cocoon of spontaneous humanity and Joy.
James Roper
Sun 15th Feb 2015 08:07
Nice. The enjambment works well with the "gathered momentum" of the situation. Made me smile.