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Submarine Dream

In the deep

blue-black

of a submarine

I made my bed the floor;

spread rough blankets

 

whilst shoals of fish

flashed past portals

in tinsel flickers

of inky light and

nightmares haunted

dreams of intangible reefs

I couldn’t reach.

 

I lay down hardened

grappling blankets;

caressing roughness

until the fleeting broke

and opaque waves

of galaxies gazed

and hinted freedom.

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Laura Taylor

Fri 20th Feb 2015 09:30

whilst shoals of fish
flashed past portals
in tinsel flickers
of inky light

Beautiful imagery here. I get the feeling that you've built a 'nest' for yourself there on the floor. That's a place we go to when we withdraw, when we desire isolation and silence only. When we're so down that only right down on the floor will do.

Lan

Sat 14th Feb 2015 10:41

Hi Nat, I love 'while shoals of fish/ flashed past portals/ in tinsel flickers/ of inky light'...thanks for sharing x

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Thu 12th Feb 2015 20:10

Beautiful Natalie,so beautiful!
The 'sub' didn't happen to be yellow did it?

That look on your face-
sooooo 'cheeky monkey'ish!


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