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Because the world is a cold, dark, lonely place

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The mind at leisure but not at rest

feels trapped and cannot up and go

 

because the world is a cold, dark, lonely place.

 

The man laid low by the thoughts he has

can only wait for those thoughts to pass,

 

because the world is a cold, dark, lonely place.

 

Feelings that come beyond one’s control;

feelings that will one day go,

 

because the world is a cold, dark, lonely place.

 

Cold darkness screams at a ray of light:

Leave me! I want to be alone, alright!

 

because the world is a cold, dark, lonely place

◄ If we did

Hopefully, this is Terminal ►

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winston plowes

Sun 10th May 2009 09:30

The world can be a desparate place for many at times. A view from within. Thx for posting
Winston

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Chris Dawson

Sun 10th May 2009 01:15

Very well put Dermot, captures the self-enforced loneliness of depression rather well.
Cx

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Francine

Sun 10th May 2009 00:52

J'aime ce poème parce que c'est direct et simple...

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shoeless

Sat 9th May 2009 21:55

yes it happens , and your poem expresses it well

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