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Seasons

Seasons

Our love ended with the snow
That was the last of us...
First day of spring and I'm here without you
A seasonal change, a start of something brand new...
The summer heat and long passionate drives
Half a year has passed and I'm still wondering "Why?"...
And Fall changes the leaves, bringing many changes to our lives
How are you? By the way, I'm doing fine...
Winter has come again and she's here in your stead
A year has passed and that is our fate, our destiny
Maybe this one will belong to me...

◄ Contemplated Suicide

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Comments

<Deleted User> (13516)

Wed 4th Mar 2015 19:38

I really like this Smash, I like how it does the full circle and ends hopefully. Just one little suggestion and that is to change the pass to passed. :)

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