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Paper star

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Simple satellite.

Its tassled colours

snaking about the sky

as though wanting

to free itself

from earthly attachments

and leave me

with the happy thought

that I had made

a beautiful contribution

to the heavens

 

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© Patricia Wilde 2015 

 

◄ Greyscious in grey

seeing blindly ►

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<Deleted User> (6895)

Fri 13th Mar 2015 17:26

no way can one beat the simple pleasures of life eh folks?
many many thanks you all. Welcome to the new boy Brian! we hope you enjoy your time on W.O.L. xx

<Deleted User> (9882)

Thu 12th Mar 2015 23:02

altruistic even! x

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Brian Hodgkinson

Thu 12th Mar 2015 22:35

Sweet poem. I like it.

<Deleted User> (9882)

Thu 12th Mar 2015 12:58

Hi Patricia.This is super! a very interesting,alturistic take on letting something go without feeling sad.

Sings to the affirmation of life.Yes indeedy! x

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