Idols
Idols with feet of clay
may
be of
little
help
when
drowning
in
shallow pools of hope
Comments
Sun 22nd Mar 2015 10:58
Hi Preeti, I really enjoyed this too, I like the layout, and just keep coming back to read it again. Also, thanks for commenting on Borderline, I really appreciate it x
The poolmight be shallow but the poetry is deep. I too enjoyed this, thaks for sharing Preeti.
Lynn Hamilton
Sat 21st Mar 2015 23:21
However shallow the pool as long as there is hope. I enjoyed reading your words.
Lynn Hamilton
Sat 21st Mar 2015 23:21
However shallow the pool as long as there is hope. I enjoyed reading your words.
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Lynn Hamilton
Sun 22nd Mar 2015 16:12
Hi Preeti. Thank you for your kind comments about my words. Still finding my way around the site and not sure why everything is coming out twice and not quite right (think that's due to fat fingers when commenting by phone)!