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dawdling

laying here - stroking your back - as you sprawl snoozing
it strikes me how much you have grown

though you are still small enough to ride mahout on my shoulders
and tug reluctant on my arm when shopping

your face when sleeping carries those babyish curves
   you pull the heart at the smallness of perfect

      but you are definitely growing

just as I get used to the slim child
   you grow chubby
   branch out and up
and a new slim child appears

   you tell me that one day you will be taller than the sky
   I can wait
   for I love the smell of your hair

children

◄ buxom

ennui ►

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Michelle

Thu 30th Apr 2015 10:48

Beautifully observed. You have talent for phrasing and imagery that really appeals to me.

Travis Brow

Sat 11th Apr 2015 12:14

''ride mahout.../and tug reluctant'', lovely phrasing Jeremy.

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