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Remembrance Sunday

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Yesterday being Remembrance Day

I made a point of remembering

And joined several hundred other rememberers

On the Town Hall Square

Where I bumped into Alec Simister

Who I hadn't seen for ten years

Now there's a man who could wear a bowler hat and rolled umbrella

As well as any city banker, retired guards officer

Or Orange Lodge member

His high cheek bones and straight black hair suggest he could be of the same lineage

As Vlad the Impaler or maybe Chinghis Khan

I was pleased that he remembered me

"I pissed my sides" he said "when I saw you in the paper,

Writing poetry, is that your latest scam?"

He was never one to mince his words.

A man constructed of dinosaur bones

His crushing grip staying on the hand for minutes

Then I drove to Stoke to visit my brother's grave.

It seemed a good thing to do it would have been his birthday today

Our street, which was falling down when we were kids

Is still falling down, the 70s makovers washed away by time

The entries seem to get narrower

But the cobbles, ever more subsided

Are still covered in dogshit

Our local pub Scrimmies, was as full as on any Sunday in my father's day

No miners now but everyone still looks old

Were these the people I went to school with?

I didn't remember them.

And they didn't remember me.

But the Bass tasted just like it used to!

The Long Good Friday ►

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Mia Darlone

Sun 9th Dec 2007 23:28

Many joyous thanks for your comment Monsieur Morgan.
I drink guiness too - except I put a shot of Tia Maria in it which generally unsettles people. I'll join you for one at Wigan if you're going.
Can't believe you know our lovely neighbours - it's a small old world.

Secret Agent Mia Darlone checking out.

<Deleted User> (5593)

Thu 15th Nov 2007 16:35

Dave, I meant I had too many "ands" in the first sentence of my comment, i.e. I was critiquing my own critique as I wrote it - very post modern

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Dave Morgan

Thu 15th Nov 2007 00:05

Strngely enough Paul, this isn't a poem, it's a blog! Somehow it just looks poem-like. Do you really think I'd write a poem which didn't rhyme. And there's only two ands! Alabaster wherefore art thou with thy wailing sax, flushed with that fullpage colour coverage in the Bolton News no doubt, ah how soon they forget you once they're rich and famous. Melissa and peter thank you for your kind comments. I am considering making this a weekly foray into the stultifyingly dull world of Dave Morgan.

<Deleted User> (5593)

Wed 14th Nov 2007 16:44

This poem is like life itself (he said pompously), it has a start and an end and is full of a mix of happiness, poignancy, sadness and things happening in the middle.
Too many "ands" says a pedant!
Seriously I enjoyed this one, I too was at a remembrance day event though in my case it was in a strange town and quite by chance.
PaulB
PS By the way Dave I thought you had recorded some poems with Alabaster - when are we going to hear them?

Pete Crompton

Tue 13th Nov 2007 01:50

nice imagery Dave, you started a story there, I was getting into it! Just like when the party gets started and they pull the plug, the shortening of time, the passing of it, oh the lamenting...will you continue the story. An english kerouac

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clarissa mckone

Mon 12th Nov 2007 03:33

its nice to run into old friends, and see places where we once lived. glad you had a nice time

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