Learning to live, without loving you
You confessed your love for me so soon
Brought light into my dark seedy life
You had my heart, as the stars have the moon
But you've ripped it apart like paper to a knife
I cannot continue this path much longer
For my efforts are always dismissed
I'm weakening where you are stronger
I've been at my knees since we kissed
I beg of you to loosen your grip
Let me go and tend to my wounds
Your distant hand cut like a whip
And now there is nothing more I can do
My heart has expended it's last beat
I must learn to live, without loving you
Mike Ligorio
Tue 28th Apr 2015 13:51
Thank you for your comments. They are much appreciated. Graham, I understand completely. I did get quite lazy towards the end. Poetry is something i just enjoy and use as an outlet, so i appreciate any constructive criticism which may benefit my writings in the future.
Nat, thank you for your comment and for sharing that poem. I really enjoyed reading it.
I will be sure to check out both of your works too.
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