THE SACRIFICE OF LIFE AND DEATH...
The shadows surround me as I blink into the sunlight , tears fill my eyes as I sacrifice my soul for life and death
I crawl back in the deep black isolated hole of the earth that I call my home.
I lay there waiting to be reborn, let the flowers grow from my waste, then let them die upon my grave
Let the sun shine her heat upon my lifeless body, let the sweat drip from my cold isolated heart. I do not fear death,I do not fear life!
I sacrifice myself for you all...
Steve Regan
Tue 26th May 2009 10:26
Hey Anne Marie, you're right, your writing is dark!
But some of the images are strong...."let the flowers grow from my waste, then let them die upon my grave". Great line.
And like this "let the sweat drip from my cold isolated heart".
All the same, I'd love to read something uplifting or cheerful from you!!