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Here

I’ve been here before

I recognise this dark place

I know its knocks and turns

familiar its edges and barbs

 

Like a terse tongue his mood licks

at the barely closed wounds from earlier words

 

Movement draws a swirl of dead air beneath the covers

Skin glances in unseen depths

Shoulders

shivering in the chill

hunch and roll

Here

the sound of his sigh roars like a crashing wave

Here

time slows with the weight of every moment

Never again

never again

will I be here

◄ Back Rub

Close your mouth ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (9882)

Thu 21st May 2015 09:28

Hi Michelle.This is stunning.Maybe leave 'its' out (between 'familiar' and 'edges')..?

Thank you.

Rose.x

Preeti Sinha

Thu 21st May 2015 05:46

Brilliant

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