"It isn't love", he said
"Any love would know this isn't love", he said.
And so I sat.
And in those hours I asked my love to leave.
I slept.
And when I woke my love woke too,
and everywhere I went that day my love was there.
"Don't dwell", I told my love.
My love just smiled,
and I knew my love would stay with me.
<Deleted User> (9882)
Sat 2nd May 2015 12:21
'any love would know this isn't love' terrific poem.x
<Deleted User> (6895)
Fri 1st May 2015 20:22
Hi Michelle.This one is right up our romantic alley way.xx
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Lan
Sat 9th May 2015 08:43
I really enjoyed reading this one, my favourite line is 'And in those hours I asked my love to leave' - so much emotion in that one line, for me about trying desperately to feel and be something other than I am. Not sure if that's what you meant by it, but I found it really touching xx