December
Oh remember remember
on the fith of December
when the snow fell cold
and the man grew old
yet a child had laughed
for the boy remained daft
and a mother weeps
all the while taking peeps
the child lay dead
for not ever fully fed
the snow kisses the ground
and somewhere two are bound
the air grows cold
yet the boy is bold
oh december
is a month to remember.
Nosidam
Tue 5th May 2015 01:23
I usually don't write with rhymes but I decided to give it a try. I agree with you that it holds it back, but I believe it fits for this one, for now. Thank you for your input.