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Killing Time

Killing time

before the big one -

luck

colour

magic.

 

Killing time

before direction -

wind

sails

wonder.

 

Killing time

before symphony -

ring

harmony

heaven.

 

Killing time

Before you cross me -

fall

arms

surrender.

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Comments

Lan

Sat 16th May 2015 02:30

I agree with Graham, Nat, this is really good, I love that there's so little explanation, that I can ponder it over and over again x

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Graham Sherwood

Thu 14th May 2015 19:15

Fascinating choices for words following killing time in each stanza. You could choose an altogether different set and the effect would still be as intriguing.

Clever idea Natalie,

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