Whats Better?
I found myself trying to piss away
A shit stain
In the bowl of my toilet.
Just read an old poem from childhood.
It was good.
But pissing away that shit stain,
Isn't that the best?
Comments
You could well be right. Bodily functions operating well are the epitome of pleasure. But a little bleach would go a long way too.
Very satisfying it is, Corr.
Equally I always enjoy pissing in any cracks in the urinal. I am conscious that someone has got to refill them and I like to think I am doing my bit for employment.
<Deleted User> (9882)
Fri 15th May 2015 19:34
Hi Corr-what about sticking 'having' in front of 'just?'
and retitle-'which is better?'
promises to be a good poem dude,so 'crack on'....tee hee
(if you mean 'pissing away a shit stain'
IS going to be a new poem.)
Thank you.
Rose.x
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Corr Lens
Wed 20th May 2015 08:06
@cynthia this poem was just a plea for toilet cleaning suggestions lol