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I realised i was me

I didn't realise how bad life could be 
Until I realised I was me

Naked in front of the mirror
Bulges where there shouldn't be 
Time wasted, time wasted, time wasted me

I didn't realise how quickly the clock of time could 
Cover me, leave me, breathless, and not

how it should be

Me up a tree
Me with you Carl creating Marvel figures before tea

Time wastes, time wasted, time wasted me

And you my father and mother feckless and insecure 
Gave me a back bone of a cripple always to spend my life on the bottom of the sea, for sure

Time wasted, time wasted, time wasted you and me

(c) David R Mellor 2015

◄ There is no party of the poor

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David R Mellor

Mon 25th May 2015 15:05

thanks i"I am Lost" for words thanks

I am lost

Sat 23rd May 2015 09:01

Nice poem... "Time wasted, time wasted, time wasted me"

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David R Mellor

Thu 21st May 2015 20:40

thank you Colin for taking the time to comment, heart warming that you like it , all true

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Thu 21st May 2015 20:09

nice one David, especially the 'creating Marvel figures before tea' line
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