Connotation
Connotation
into the pool
of your mind
a poet
drops
each
word
like a cut jewel
full of inner fire
spreading
its own
many-faceted
meanings
Cynthia Buell Thomas
Comments
beautiful layout and a beautifully simple poem which makes you think
<Deleted User> (5763)
Wed 27th May 2009 15:47
hi Cynthia
-each word drip, drip, drips into my mind
off the end of the line
-Great!
darren thomas
Tue 26th May 2009 10:05
I prefer the words. Simplistic and based around just two verbs. You have provided the outline for the reader to fill. I like this type of work.
Thank you, Carol. I am a strong believer in the rhythmic power of visual poetry as well as the spoken word. More people read poetry than speak it. May I presume that the meaning was also there?
Hi Cynthia,
I like the way you have set this poem out, like ripples on water :)
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<Deleted User> (13947)
Fri 28th Aug 2015 12:42
Oh I love the layout of this one! Another great find. Your words so true. The drop effects of the words leading to the overall pool for the reader to think on is excellent.