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What Salvador Dali Said One Time

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“Beauty will be edible or there will be no such thing at all.”

Ok, so yes, I do refer to you as that Welsh girl
in the pink dress with the catcurl eyes and the Elvis lip.
But what have you got against the Welsh my dear?

I call you pig nosed too but you don’t seem to care
about all that when I stroke your back,
tickle your nape and flick my tongue.
That silent glitter on your cheek does wonders.

Everyday you overtake me.
Hazelnuts weave through your hair.
Caramel thighs drip.
I kiss the vanilla swarms of your lips.
Feel the velvet layer of skin,
smooth over lean meat.
Illicit apples, burning fires.
Panting until breath is lost.

I remember that time at your Mother’s house
when I bit your lip; the blood
fizzed on my buds as I swallowed.

I was tempted to your heart,
that fist of a pear that you held back.
I waited till you slept then snuck out my blade.




*Illustration by Anna Smith

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winston plowes

Tue 26th May 2009 23:34

Bloody Hell John. Great stuff. "the catcurl eyes and the Elvis lip" a favourite and then the sumptuous details of the 3rd stanza. Really liked this one. Win

darren thomas

Tue 26th May 2009 09:35

Well paced. Beautiful phonology and propelled with rocket-fuel imagery.

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clarissa mckone

Tue 26th May 2009 01:01

nice poem.

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