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A Second Chance (For Terri)

I dreamt about you

last night

for the first time

in years.

You were in a hospital

or refuge

or somewhere

like that.

I climbed a rope

with a rose

between my teeth,

up three storeys

at dark blue midnight

to your bed,

slipped in beside you.

There was a man’s voice

murmuring

somewhere

off-camera

and I felt the warmth

and the firmness

of your body,

your new tattoo

in the dark blue light

and you woke up,

smiled,

said hey

what you doing here?

and I said shush,

be quiet,

don’t make a noise;

I have come to save you

again. 

◄ Song For Jean Duluoz

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Russ Litten

Wed 27th May 2015 23:11

Thank you for the kind words. Colin, it literally was an early morning wake up poem, wrote it straight onto my phone at 4.30am pretty much how it's presented here. The dream was exactly how it happened in the poem. Lucky, really, like catching a vivid silver fish from the murky depths of sleep

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 27th May 2015 16:33

Totally engaging from start to finish. And it leaves the reader to fill in any scenario desired - very good 'poet-ing'.

<Deleted User> (13762)

Tue 26th May 2015 07:38

Hey, I like this one, has the feel of an early-morning-waking-up-dream. x

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