what can i say?
what i see is what i want,
but what i see doesn't see my want
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totally agree with you graham here. lot said in a few lines
The brevity of this is its strength. If it was tidied up a little it would have more impact
What can I say?
What I see is what I want,
but what I see
doesn't see my want.
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<Deleted User> (13947)
Thu 9th Jul 2015 16:50
I agree with Graham also. Reading this made me think of the quote from Madame de Stael "The desire of the man is for the woman, but the desire of the woman is for the desire of the man." Nicely done Sharon.