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Garden Thoughts

lost spots of sunlight

dreamed into a flower

how a rose is born

rosenature

◄ Infinity

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ali bell

Thu 23rd Jul 2015 07:30

I liked all the lines! Thanks :)

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JJ

Thu 23rd Jul 2015 06:58

Am glad you liked the lines. (except the 3rd one.)

You describe them well. Thanks for that.

Keep writing. Take care.

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ali bell

Thu 23rd Jul 2015 06:23

No need to apologize! Those lines are beautiful.
"Flawless like moonlight" could mean the purity of the color of the rose. "Showered by rain" also describes the process of a flower growing (how a rose is born). Is this what you were thinking? I'm very happy my poem inspired another work!

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JJ

Thu 23rd Jul 2015 05:43

These lines just popped in my mind immediately after i read your lines.

Apologies in advance, that I wrote them without your consent.

Please let me know if you like them?

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flawless like moonlight

showered by rain

miraculously no thorn

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ali bell

Thu 23rd Jul 2015 05:17

Thanks!

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winston plowes

Wed 22nd Jul 2015 23:59

Lovely haiku Ali.

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