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karaoke 2 (07/23/2015)

Jesus christ.
This crucifix is heavy,
leaden steps through the rehearsal
granted wishes: role reversal
twisted sisters; men of cloth
drawn to flame as man to moth
a panoramic curiosity
low-fi infidelity
delivered evil, picked and packed pieces
the familiar scent of me.

it doesn't hurt less

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<Deleted User> (13762)

Sun 2nd Aug 2015 07:38

it's a sad reflection on this site that your contributions receive so little comment John. As I've said before, I never fully understand your work - maybe I really am lowbrow - but I admire the way you connect your words - I could pick examples from almost every line.

your quiet stoicism (?) inspires me not to delete my profile and slip off the radar, for the moment anyway.

jesus christ this crucifix is heavy...

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