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deep south

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she steps outside

into southern heat

and deep cicada noise

 

bud light in hand

unsteady on bare feet

a drunken heady poise

 

exhaling smoke spirals

swaying to the swing seat

thru scattered yard toys

 

he follows her scented trail

with manly entreats

night threats employed

 

his handful of stiffness

the tired air con unit bleating

just another din that annoys

 

a mouthful of ice cold beer

dark neighborhood streets

holding it all back to enjoy

 

she takes his hot lusting

sticky as candy sweets

abandoned in cars destroyed

 

this token moment of love

dirty and indiscreet

a pleasure for her sonny boy

 

suffocating her childhood cries

crippled with defeat

defence methods deployed

 

he wanders back indoors

screaming cicadas in deep heat

her heart beats an intense noise

 

 

Words and pictures ©Colsibabes 2015

to view the PhotoPoem please visit:

http://colsibabes.blogspot.co.uk/

 

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Comments

<Deleted User> (13762)

Thu 13th Aug 2015 07:21

thanks for reading and taking time to comment Tommy and Ray - much appreciated

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raypool

Wed 12th Aug 2015 22:28

very cinematic and dramatic Colin, gets you right in there with the action. Smoldering. Very neatly put together.

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Tommy Carroll

Wed 12th Aug 2015 21:48

Interesting form Col, it seems to start with Raymond Carver and end with...f Scott Fitzgerald

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