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Mirror Man (Part Two)

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                        Mirror Man (Part Two)

 

 

………….Can bless the very

Freedom that they cradle, from wars

Grandiosity talk,

 

 

            Talking, talking all the yidder yadder,

Be unknown for fallen hero’s,

And those who bare the scars

Of blades scored scorching

Across their heart, can

Only feel the desperate wit of

Humility as stark, the loneliness in

Solitary loathes the unforgiven man………..

◄ Mirror Man

Mirror Man (Part Three) ►

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winston plowes

Fri 19th Jun 2009 00:44

Hi Again... So, Now I see a man and a UN vehicle and the continued line at the start ends a powerful sentence. We are in a war zone with the UN. The middle section for me shows the seperation between politics / the press and the reality o the ground. Each in its own sphere. On to pt 3...

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