Always remember the beach
How about the beach? Sandy feet, fresh breeze. Seize the sunlight, beam just as bright
How about flying a kite? Light, the campfire, just right. Tent settled, just behind that tree you see?
How perfect could this be? Gazing beside one another; amongst grass and stars We huggled as if it could have been mistaken for smuggled me into your arms
How about one bottle cracked? Spreaded cot, advantaged lot. However we departed, even if death parted
Promise me you'll always remember the beach, how it completed... You and me.
Abi Thomson
Fri 16th Oct 2015 09:43
Huw thanks for your comment sounds like a visualisation of my poem in life form, fantastic.
Lynne I have read Plath and like her poetry very much, massive compliment thanks so much X