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Every Mobile is on Silent

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Every mobile is on silent

every mail unread

every touch of human kindness unsaid


 

every day you wait

in the bus queue

behind the door

just waiting for someone to say

“you can take no more”


 

but...


 

Every mobile is on silent

every mail unread

every touch of human kindness is unsaid


 

◄ This is a Holy Death

I Have Killed My Child ►

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David R Mellor

Fri 23rd Oct 2015 18:44

thanks Patrico, thanks for taking the time to comment and heartwarming you like it

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David R Mellor

Fri 23rd Oct 2015 18:41

very true Adam , i always find those moments of pleasant chats with strangers very life affirming , thanks for the comment

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Patricio LG

Fri 23rd Oct 2015 06:59

Very nice deep message.

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Adam Whitworth

Wed 21st Oct 2015 00:47

A person with the luxury of waiting in bus queues and worrying about mobiles etc can be depressed but someone will say something- and it will be a lot more than "you can take no more".

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