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Beware! The Man Who Holds The Monkey's Paw

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Beware! The Man Who Holds The Monkey’s Paw

 

The wolf is at the door,

dragging your hungry children

across the cobbles of Victorian conditions,

their ribs rat-a-tat-tatting

like a wooden washboard.

In the clinging northern mist

ghosts drift across the streets

before settling into doorways

where no one sees them.

 

A creature lurches into view,

its frame a mass of body parts

stitched together by tired doctors

in bleak basements.

It stumbles into the night

and mingles with the un-dead

pacing the towns and cities

looking for flesh to chew upon.

 

An old woman chuckles,

then coughs grey phlegm

into a bowl beside her,

sneezes and wheezes

and mutters ancient curses

at the mob who would take

everything she has

and burn her as a witch.

 

Ghouls, feasting on the dying,

glory in their blue skinned gluttony

and turn the thumb screws tighter

on the poor peasants.

At number eleven

a blood sucking count

begins to lick his lips

and dreams of feeding.

 

Graveyard Britain,

now alive with the once dead -

animated and angry

at the desecrations brought upon them.

Crawling from their tombs

and spilling towards Westminster -

their souls glowing

with righteous anger.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 28th Oct 2015 20:32

How can this work not be flooded with comments, ie. GREAT comments on the subject, the wide scope and the clarity of expression. It is terrific.

There is a very scary story about 'the Monkey's Paw' is there not? I have a vague recollection.

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Harry O'Neill

Wed 28th Oct 2015 10:55

Ian,
Ian I`m `resting` at the moment, but I had to pick up on this magnificently ghoulish effort.

All your figures fit with admirable and cannibalistic aptness, particularly those first four lines of stanza two. (and they are standing out in a very respectable poetic whole)

I `get` the return to Victorian poverty political slant you have given this, but the quality of your image-choices outclass the worthy theme.

It knocks all that phoney weird stuff around in the films at the moment into a cocked hat.

Thoroughly enjoyed!

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