under the night sky
a dark overcoat
at night
where the boat
on the canal
sways
and the planet light
sheens
on a couple, ahead
who love
under the night sky
in all
it can hide
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Comments
<Deleted User> (5151)
Mon 22nd Jun 2009 12:34
thanks win. took up your suggestion. sways fits nicely.
i'm really enjoying the poems i've been writing lately. been a lot of fun.
x
Hi Emily, Really liked this one. I live on a canal boat and so could really apreciate the scene you paint. Actually narrowboats don't bob. A fishing boat may bob but a canal boat sways, which you may like better. Win x
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Isobel
Mon 22nd Jun 2009 13:13
So love your little poems - they leave such a beautiful image.