For Janis
the night falls
in silence
time
fades the
summer grass
and i countÂ
each
stepping breath
of your heart
Comments
Sun 15th Nov 2015 09:08
I agree with Martin, this is lovely and poignant - the more so in its simplicity.
I love how you are able to convey so much with so few words. this is beautiful.
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Cynthia Buell Thomas
Tue 17th Nov 2015 21:28
A really heart-touching little poem, sensitively and effectively crafted.
I'm going back to read some of your other work. Perhaps one a day or so. I'm looking forward to it.