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World

Sensed

The world

Slightly shake

His head

 

Waved

His fist

Shouting

‘I’ve seen

Enough’

Now go

Away

 

He looked

Towards

The sun

Stared at

The moon

And pleaded 

With the stars

 

They sighed

Replied

Shrugged

Shoulders

And 

Lowered

Their eyes

 

'Sorry mate

We know 

You've had

It rough

But your

Time is

Nearly up

 

The human

Race

Is now

Coming 

For us'

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Black Velvet ►

Comments

Lynn Hamilton

Sun 15th Nov 2015 17:10

Thanks for reading and commenting. The world can be a very isolated place considering its so full of people. In the first verse it ended with 'today' which I removed as I think the world slightly shakes its head every day. I do hope so too. x

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