SHIT
Need
To hide
In
The
Sewers
I’ll
Sit
Maybe
Even
Take a
Dip
Inhale
Deeply
Close
My
Eyes
Put my
Head
Back
With
Mouth
Open
Wide
Solids
Enter
And
Slowly
Dribble
Out
I’ll swim
With
And
Eat
Shit
Just
Don’t
Make me
To Listen
To it
Comments
Lynn Hamilton
Fri 4th Dec 2015 19:23
Thanks Graham, Mr LDLB and Cynthia.
Graham, it is and I have plenty of it!
Mr LDLB, I'm always seem to be in the shit, it's just the depth that changes!
Cynthia, yep your probably is correct but this 'shit' is subject to change on a daily basis according to taste!
Glad you enjoyed it ;) x
SHIT as a metaphor covers every imaginable subject. This is a very clever way of referring the actual physical 'shit' (with exacting detail) to any range of ideas the reader wants, or needs. The straight-down-the-hole format is both brilliant and very funny.Probably hitting the political scene broadside. Or maybe just an irritating person like a partner.
IMO, a really good poem.
<Deleted User> (8659)
Fri 4th Dec 2015 10:08
Well Lynn, there's a lot of it about. We've all got to either swim with the tide or we drown! Good poem. Ledger
Is this what they mean by verbal diarrhoea?
Sorry just couldn't resist going through the motions!
Graham
Lynn Hamilton
Fri 4th Dec 2015 08:38
Thanks for reading and commenting JG x
J Graham
Thu 3rd Dec 2015 22:59
Love it!
Lynn Hamilton
Thu 3rd Dec 2015 20:07
Pardon! Thanks x
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Ria Richardson
Sat 12th Dec 2015 23:32
Love this Lynn xx