Looking over the shoulder
wasn’t so long ago in past
With hoards of aspirations
and prospects spread vast
Near lifetime since elapsed
never took stock to assess
All dished if in conjunction
or dealt out somewhat less
Known paths earlier chosen
how divergent turned about
Handful proved pleasurable
few could be done without
In unraveling the unknown
no responses ever emerged
Intent while stayed singular
but core objectivity diverged
Harry O'Neill
Fri 11th Dec 2015 15:03
Chopra,
This terse style (which I call morse-code staccato sentencing style) is very understandable.
I keep getting the feeling that it could be adapted for some
sort of (urgent style?) modern poem.
Keep `em coming.