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Bus Lane Twat

Wipers sigh

Removing

Droplets

Spat

From

The sky

 

Alternating

Fingers

Flick

Switches,

Front

And

Rear,

Dance

Wipers

Dance

 

Spit

Swept

Aside

Allows

A glance

 

Up

And

Down

No

Distinction

Between

Sky

And

Road

 

Left

And

Right

No

Distinction

Between

Expression

Or

Plight

 

Digital

Dashboard

Brightly

Laughs

‘You are

So late

You need

To go’

 

I don’t

I sit

And I wait

Watching

The twat

Take

The bus

Lane 

 

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Comments

Lynn Hamilton

Sat 19th Dec 2015 08:08

Thanks Martin. x

Lynn Hamilton

Sat 19th Dec 2015 08:02

Thanks Darren. Fortunately, I don't print out. You've got me wondering now if I should? x

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Martin Elder

Fri 18th Dec 2015 08:04

I like this format for this piece, it works particularly well. Nice one Lynn

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Darren Lea-grime

Thu 17th Dec 2015 23:18

like it lynn! the format must cost you a fortune when you print stuff out

daz

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Thu 17th Dec 2015 20:01

Lmao - nice reply Lynn x

Lynn Hamilton

Thu 17th Dec 2015 19:58

Nope probably not Colin. I'm starting to bore myself, to be honest, but that's the way it is. x

<Deleted User> (13762)

Thu 17th Dec 2015 19:56

one day Lynn I half expect you will surprise us with a change of format.

just wondering x

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