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bluelit 2 (12/23/2015)

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If I laid next to you right now, my lips would find your throat, gentle and dreamlike between your breaths as not to free you from good dreams. 
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my legs would coil and cradle around you, inching you closer, settling like sediment against me, perfectly warm, and my arms would slide up your sides so I could feel you stirring.
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and my heart would break, shiver and shatter
when your moan passed over my ear and you held me back
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Baby please come home

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Comments

Lan

Tue 12th Jan 2016 02:31

Have felt a bit bad about my very basic comments on this one, keep thinking about it. I found it beautiful because I wish someone would write something so lovely about me, and to be honest I don't really want to analyse how you managed to inspire that feeling in me, but however you did it, it is beautiful :)

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John Bastard

Thu 31st Dec 2015 08:35

Um well thank you

<Deleted User> (13947)

Thu 31st Dec 2015 04:55

I very much enjoyed this. I've come to read it a few times in the last couple of days and have been hoping for some words to show up to express how much I liked it beyond 'i liked it' but sorry that's all I have. Like Lea has said it is beautiful :)

Lan

Sun 27th Dec 2015 22:37

Heh heh! Because I said so....

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John Bastard

Sun 27th Dec 2015 15:09

why

Lan

Sun 27th Dec 2015 01:06

Beautiful

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