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David Bowie

The alien has taken his last trip to Mars,

On the Berlin express,

Calling from station to station,

With his uncle Arthur and the laughing gnome.

He’s escaped the scary monsters and the super-creeps.

Ashes to ashes this stardust talent,

This thin white duke.

Artist, poet, writer, trend setter, actor, experimentalist.

Ch-ch-ch-changes will break our hearts.

◄ A box of mini soldiers, some dice and Sean Bean

Japan love affair 1990 ►

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DavidAddington

Mon 18th Jan 2016 15:48

Thanks for the comment Wolfgar. Could alter the end line but the idea of changes break hearts from the loss seems more potent, although, makes and breaks could easily go together.

I will check your poetry out as I need to spend more time looking at people's work on here.


Cheers

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