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Youth

Lured by your
Elegant posture
When at its best
Appears nature,
Replete with optimism
Courage and adventure,
All welcome you
To lament and bemoan
Your quick departure!

Youth ageing

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Alem Hailu G/Kristos

Mon 18th Jan 2016 07:28

I brought the sentence "Virginal beauty" to make things vivid for ray ,the person who asked for further explanation.
By the way don't you know that both men and women pass through a similar faith?
Psychologists tell us that the biological clock is not only meant for women.Most men could also suffer impotence after 40. Brose and read a book entitled Sex Power Before and After 40.Your masculine vigour is at its height when you are young.
Also psychologists tell us that except the red flag boys experience almost a similar feeling of depression as their girl friends. I call others who read about this issue to comment on it.
Compare your photos.Obviously you were at the peak when you were young.
By the way the word virgin could be used to mention a new experience.
Once on BBC I had heard a figurative person participating in marathon organized for philanthropic purpose saying "I am a Marathon virgin!"
In literature too I have learnt that writers who are not native speakers are more sensitive to words and expressions than the native ones and as such it is no surprise for the former to outsmart the latter at times. Here also experts on the domain could add something.
This blog is meant for learning from each other and brainstorming but not for mockery.I have learnt a lot from other blogs too,.

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Alem Hailu G/Kristos

Sat 16th Jan 2016 14:40

Children get eager to be young.Adults on the other hand want to stay young.
If you see the age milestone youth seems the best
For instance a girl is at the height of her virginal beauty at her youth.
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