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It falls

It falls

 

This weather is killing me

I was promised snow last year

got none

now it falls 

too much to dig out

not good for a depressed guy 

get out of the the house she says

the good doc 

such wisdom and study

what to do?

get another job

be a better dad 

get the bank situation fixed

not a a good mix for the sad

smoke

think

smoke

I should eat something

keep your head up!!

pills close

snow and depression is:

cocaine and tissues 

football and turf toe

burgers and indigestion

make it stop

I need today

â—„ Confidence

They â–º

Comments

Bruce Strosnider

Thu 4th Feb 2016 22:23

good one. builds. use punctuation throughout or not at all.

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