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I've Got That Feeling....

I’ve got

That feeling

You know…..

That feeling?

 

Like you’ve

Been

Swallowed

Whole

Digested

And thrown

Back

Up

 

Splattered

All

Over the

Ceiling

 

Someone's

Shouting

Bring a

Bucket

Sand

And

Quick

 

Consultant

Walks down

The ailse

 

Followed

By his

Bride

Holding

His train

To one

Side   

 

Whilst

Balancing

A tray of

English

Breakfast tea

 

Doctor,

I’ve got

That feeling

You know…..

That feeling?

 

When you

Roll that

Glass over

The rash

 

And despite

Your next

Trick

It doesn’t

Fucking

Abracadabra

Disappear

 

Roll it

Once

Again

I

Beg

 

Looking

Into

His eyes

I ask

 

‘Hey, is he

Gonna

Survive’

 

Eyes

Look back

At me 

And say

 

'I’ve got

That feeling

You know…...

That feeling?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Comments

Lynn Hamilton

Fri 26th Feb 2016 18:34

Thanks Cynthia. As I don't consider my writing poetry or enter into technicalities of what constitutes a good poem. I just write and it goes down on paper how it comes out. Regards Lynn x

Lynn Hamilton

Fri 26th Feb 2016 18:26

Thanks Colin and a musical link is always welcome! I just struggle to find the time to reciprocate. X

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Tue 23rd Feb 2016 20:41

I like this a lot. Why do you stretch out the poem?

<Deleted User> (13762)

Tue 23rd Feb 2016 07:56

very good Lynn - I'm resisting the urge to add another musical link (Beatles I've Got a Feeling) - instincts etc x

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