They lay
They lay
as distant in their sleep
as cars upon the street
bums and bumpers
back to back
double parked
in a life
as empty
as the wordsÂ
they spoke
at their wedding
service
Comments
Amen. I'm vehemently opposed to the concept of marriage, and your last few lines speak volumes to me.
As Cynthia say, to use such few words to convey your meaning is a true art.
IMO, a superb poem, the essence of what fine poetry really does - to evolve deep meaning in a few brilliant words. And the craftsmanship to express your idea.
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Ronnie leek
Thu 24th Mar 2016 15:17
Thank you, Laura and Cynthia. I'm really touched.