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No

No beat
No goal
No rhyme
No soul
 
No heart
No joy
No play
No ploy
 
No voice
No sound
No sky
No ground
 
No black
No white
No bark
No bite
 
No legs
No arms
No powers
No charms
 
No fun
No games
No fire
No flames
 
No bricks
No steel
No drink
No meal
 
No word
No ink
No speech,
Just think
 
No trees
No leaves
No air
To breathe
 
No smiles
No toil
No work
No soil
 
No friends
No beer
No pause
No cheer
 
No Joker
No Ace
No substance
Just space
 
No form
No notion
No drive
No motion
 
All limbs
Disjoint
No poem
- No point
 
(Poem written in an exercise after reading "No!" by Thomas Hood.)
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Comments

Jemima Jones

Mon 28th Mar 2016 20:49

another good one David.Hope you don't mind considering a little suggestion?

No joker
No ace
No substance
No filled space?
and,I would have left the last stanza out.
Thank you.Jemima.

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David Blake

Sun 27th Mar 2016 22:59

No comments?

Here's one. This gets the Yes stamp of approval. Nice work. DB.

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