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I'll try not to listen

I’ll listen

To the

Dogs bark

At the wind

Howling

At the tiles

On the roof

 

I’ll listen

As they

Lose  

Their grip

And hit

The street

 

A dying man

Singing

I’ll try

Not to listen

 

I’ll listen

To hunger

Bellowed

Out through

A baby’s

Lungs

Screeching

 

I’ll listen

To her

Tired sigh

As she loses

Her grip

And cracks

In

The kitchen

Sink

 

A dying man

Singing

I’ll try

Not to listen

 

Strumming   

Memories

From a 

Favourite

Melody  

 

Voice cracking

Losing it's grip  

Hitting the floor

Faltering to a hum  

 

I'll try not to listen  

 

 

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Comments

Lynn Hamilton

Wed 13th Apr 2016 06:36

Hi Phil. Thanks for reading and commenting. I enjoyed reading through your work too. I wish there was a facility to print people's head pictures out to see how they compare! x

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Various

Mon 11th Apr 2016 21:57

I like the questions you ask in all your poems. I like the pictures I see when I read this and them. Thank you.

Lynn Hamilton

Wed 30th Mar 2016 12:46

Thank you Ginger for reading and commenting. x

Lynn Hamilton

Wed 30th Mar 2016 10:53

Morning Martin. Thanks again for reading and your generous comments. I hope you are well x

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Ginger

Tue 29th Mar 2016 20:02

I agree, this is very deep in emotions

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Martin Elder

Tue 29th Mar 2016 18:53

This is fab Lynn. The feelings that you portray here often resonate with me. Particularly that of the dog. nice one

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