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Incredulity

Oh no, not him again!

She places the cappuccino on the counter

and accepts the woman’s correct money

with a distracted smile. 

It is Monday morning after an eventful weekend

that was both ecstatic and disastrous

in equal measures

and now here was the reason in her queue waiting to be served. 

She would have got her assistant to serve him

but had just sent her on her break;

also she needs to work at this second branch of her business

until it is up and running as well as the original.

 

“I’m so sorry,” he says as soon as he reaches the counter.

“I really did have to leave when I did. 

My granddad got taken to hospital, and it was serious...

and you looked so peaceful I didn’t want to disturb...”

 

“Is there something you wish to buy?” she asks.

“Um yeah – OK, I’ll have a latte, but darling, don’t be like that. 

We were good together, weren’t we?”

“I thought so, but then I met your girlfriend.”

 

A puzzled frown is his response.  “The girlfriend I don’t have?”

“Well, she had a key to your apartment so what else am I think?”

“AH!  Now we have it!” he erupts.  “You met my auntie!

I told you she may come to clean.”

 

“Your auntie?” she cries

 then laughs with incredulity. 

“You expect me to believe that leggy blonde is your AUNTIE?” 

More people enter her shop and she recollects professionalism.

“That’ll be two pounds 80.”

 

With a hurt expression resembling that of an abandoned puppy,

he pays and leaves with his latte.

Once she has indulged in another chuckle at his expense,

she continues serving with an increasingly heavy heart...

 

Later in the day, she serves three females

in what looks like a family group

but is amazed to see that one is the leggy blonde,

the supposed auntie! 

And then it dawns on her, the family resemblance...

 

“You really should give my nephew a break, love,”

says the young aunt. 

“My dad was taken ill. 

He owns the building you were in

and I have a flat in between.

Oh and meet his mother and his sister.

My sister here had him when I was only ten.”

 

Of course he could have set them all up

but laden with boutique bags

they are obviously on a girly shopping spree together

and were too much alike

and too much like him for this not to be true.

She hardly knows what to say...

 

Closing her coffee shop for the day

there he suddenly is waiting for her outside on the pavement.

“Darling, we have to talk,” he says with urgency.

 

“Yes,” she agrees,

“today you told me a story that was so ridiculous

it just has to be true.

 Come back to mine.”

 

His eyes suddenly transform

from dejected puppy status

to dancing with joy.

And watching him, her heart melts

she knows she has made the right choice.

 

Yes, of course she had been right in saying no more toyboys for her

but maybe this one deserves a second chance...

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◄ Disappointment

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Lynn Dye

Sun 3rd Apr 2016 22:36

Ha ha ha, thanks for that, Rob.

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Robert Mann

Sun 3rd Apr 2016 20:06

Lynn - here's one back at ya!

Pussy was purring
On my lap quite contented
Cat full up with cream

Rob

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Lynn Dye

Sun 3rd Apr 2016 10:04

Hi Rob, cheers for liking my trilogy.

Oh, and here's a haiku just for you:

If God intended
Women to have no pleasure
Why the clitoris?

Apologies for that one, ha ha, couldn't resist...

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Robert Mann

Sat 2nd Apr 2016 14:08

Lynn - please see my comments on Jemima's latest then come and see me in my office please!
Rob

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Lynn Dye

Fri 1st Apr 2016 19:14

Good one, Jemima, ha ha.

Thank you for your kind comments x

Jemima Jones

Fri 1st Apr 2016 17:11

she might be tempted to disclose what is under her pinney Lynn,but I hope she doesn't disclose her pin mumbers! haha! good stuff Lynn.Thank you.Jemima.

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Lynn Dye

Thu 31st Mar 2016 21:15

Thank you very much Jim and Chizobam, glad you enjoyed.

I was an aunt myself at 7 and a great aunt at the grand old age of 28! :0)

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Chizobam Obi

Thu 31st Mar 2016 09:00

I loved it

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Jim Trott

Thu 31st Mar 2016 03:36

I enjoyed this, Lynn. I wish my aunties had been like that, ha ha!

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Lynn Dye

Wed 30th Mar 2016 21:55

Although Disappointment was meant as a stand alone poem, it could also have been seen as a follow up to Uncertainty.
That being the case, this poem is the finale.
Just a bit of fun, as they say.

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