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Ghost Story III (Part 1)

 
The press were still reporting
About the slaughter at the station
For days after.
 
Lacing into the carnage
With every angle imaginable
From the young girl
At W H Smiths
Who thought she saw a ghost
 
And the policeman
Who nearly died
For the following two weeks
In the hospital
Almost convinced that God
Sent him a angel
To guide him
Into the afterlife,
 
Interlinking human interest stories
With the just plain daft
And melodramatic
From schoolboys shielding
Their pet dogs,
 
To a train driver
Who slept through everything
In his carriage,
 
Bleeding out every ounce
Of possible news
They could
Before they would move
Onto the football
Just up the road,
 
Totally not realising
This was just the beginning
 
Of the end.
 
(The story can be followed here It will be updated daily throughout April. I am also after submissions within this world or ghost poems / stories on the whole. Get in touch if interested)
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Andy N

Sun 17th Apr 2016 19:48

thanks guys. great doing these again. missed the characters i must admit.

yeah, i will amend this Laura defo.

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steve pottinger

Mon 4th Apr 2016 17:35

Nice work, Andy.

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Laura Taylor

Fri 1st Apr 2016 13:24

Topical and bang on, Andy. With the shivering promise of more.

Would you consider changing 'about' to 'on', in that second line?

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