In Dickens
My head is buried in Dickens
Oblivious to passing
Hedge wall and fence
The train chitter clatters
Ignored in open fields
By disinterested cows and sheep
The tiredness and regular rhythm of the train
Plays on my ability to keep awake
Until it slows and pulls into the station
Sighing with a jolt where the doors slide open
And we the passengers are greeted
By the moving stream of others
Who fill the carriage
With bikes, coats and cases
Budging shoving pushing
Every other soul along
An excited
Some forlorn
And weary crowd
Who jostle and juggle suit cases
And pushchairs
Steaming like cows on a winters day
A child crying and climbing
Trying to force its way
From its buggy
The mother in tight fitting jeans and heels
Speaks in an African Tongue on her phone
Whilst another of her offspring
No more than three or four
Simply stands eyes wide open
Big brown saucers
Apparently fascinated by all around her
Smiling and mute
Her chocolate tone offset from her bright
And pretty dress
The train moves off
With a repeated shudder
The smile and the talking mother undaunted
Through tunnel and screaming
Of demanding child
Until at last a dummy is produced
And child is released into its mother’s arms
Conversation continued
As if nothing else had happened
And onward we travel through
Intermittent chatter and motivated distraction
My head rocks and eyes flicker again after
Just a few more lines of Dickens
And then we have reached our destination
And my head and eyes rear
To attention
The smile from the child still there
As I leave the carriage
Ready to make that change
Crossing platforms
To yet another waiting train
This time full to the brim
Of brief cases, suits and ties
Nails, skirts and phones
All of which I manage to ignore
And my head goes down
For a second round of
Being lost in Dickens
The battle to stay awake
And remain in the moment
Won
Three pages read
Before termination
And walking home
Martin Elder
Tue 10th May 2016 11:54
Thanks for your comments on this piece.
LCPTB strangely I enjoy travelling on trains. It is as much about seeing humanity in a completely different environment.
Nicola I am glad you liked this piece. I was in two minds whether to post this or not and kept tinkering with it before hand to make sure it sounded O.K.
Thanks again guys