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madrugada

in shadows of darkness

drifting

into subconscious

aimlessly

finding my way

i dip in and out

as

hazy images transpire

i am

floating on the outskirts

as

dreamland beckons

soon

i shall succumb

as always

into that vivid

delicious

world of visions

.......

and improbabilities.

🌷(4)

◄ Victoria

Lunar Eclipse 28.9.15 ►

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Lynn Dye

Sun 24th Apr 2016 22:46

Thank you Trish'n'Stef and Jemima for your lovely comments. Glad you liked. x


Thanks also to Rose for the like. x

Jemima Jones

Sun 24th Apr 2016 10:37

Lynn,this poem has to rate among your best.Love it! Thank you.Jemima.

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Sun 24th Apr 2016 08:39

this is more than a bit good Lynn-its fantastic!

P&S

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Lynn Dye

Sat 23rd Apr 2016 21:42

Thank you for the likes, Ray and Joshua.
Cheers, both.

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