irretrievably
a spoil of war
guns beamed and men fell
their tools glistened at the call
we heard the swinging hammers of
history to be made
and answered the lightning strike of
history meant to fade
deals on wheels
an underground stake
driven deep
growing metastatic root
proto-negative flashes show light
into the coming night
of a future entangled
Thomas Johnson
Sat 30th Apr 2016 21:26
Keep up the exotic verbage. It's intellectually energizing.
Fri 29th Apr 2016 08:16
ever so clever! Thank you.Jemima.
elPintor
Fri 29th Apr 2016 01:26
Thanks kindly for the comments. This seemed to me to need a little reworking, but I let it go anyway.
elPintor
<Deleted User> (9882)
Thu 28th Apr 2016 22:09
Brilliant!
Rose.
<Deleted User> (6895)
Thu 28th Apr 2016 10:18
"growing metastistic root"
such a great description elPintor.
Regards.
P&S
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elPintor
Sat 30th Apr 2016 23:36
Thanks everyone for the encouraging words. Your responses are greatly appreciated.
elPintor