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Lost Today

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I lost a friend today

My friend departed in a different way

I see the space my friend once stood

I remember when the time was good

When we both shared a part of a lifetime

Before they departed and went to the divine

My friend I wish you were still here

I wish I did not feel this fear

This sense you are here yet you have gone

The pain so real its second to none

You are nothing more than a world away

I wish on earth you could of stayed

That moment in time we were together

That moment I would have it that way forever.

◄ New Day

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melanie coady

Sun 30th Jan 2011 19:35

i cried..enough said!

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Val Cook

Sun 26th Jul 2009 12:27

I like this poem Janet,I easily identify with your words. I hope you don`t mind but maybe if you replace friend in two lines with she /he your poem would be more emotive.

" She/he departed in a different way."
"Before she/he departed---
Punctuation Janet, helps the flow.
Good work

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