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Sunday Shiraz

Cider made from apples dry
Cannot touch the mellow stance
Nor begin to feel the depth, which I
may gaze and flow in merry dance
 
When red grape bleeds into my mouth
sinking, tickling my tonsils keen
I cannot be but in pure ease
My mind blurs in a haze serene
 
Hark!  Shiraz brings a gush of spice
And fruit and smoke and peppers pure
A bold perfection can but entice;
The weekend's dusk is soft allure
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David Lindsay

Wed 11th May 2016 23:06

Thanks for the feedback!
A long way from my usual style of writing. I dare say it was brought on by rare Yorkshire sunshine and, of course, a glass or two of red wine :)

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Laura Taylor

Wed 11th May 2016 13:29

MMmm, yes please, I'll have a glass! Lovely piece this, but you just made me want to drink booze at lunchtime.

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Harry O'Neill

Tue 10th May 2016 21:56

There`s something autumnal about this one.

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