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Blue Hands

Blue hands clapped wildly, as if

applauding the opening night

of a new hit Broadway musical show,

trying to sting them back to life.

Millions of feet puncture holes

in the virgin snow on a New York winters morn,

like a magnificent herd of wilder beast,   

stampeding across the open savannah

of a Central Park, bathed by a fading neon moon.

A few blocks away a xylophone of icicles

cascade from the broken gutter

of a rundown apartment building,

on the corner of East 44th Street and Maddison.

As the sun seeped through the concrete Redwood’s,

tear shaped droplets wept from the icy face.

As they fall, the film of each watery bead

captures a sequence of stills,

like scenes from a 1930’s movie feature,

before shattering into a thousand broken dreams

on the cold harsh sidewalks of reality.

A shrill scream pierces the noise of swarming passengers

and the hissing of steam train brakes at Grand Central.

A body has been found frozen to the tracks, blue hands.

I guess, his part of New York City sleeps now.

 

©Phil Golding 07/09

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Philip Golding

Thu 30th Jul 2009 12:42

I am really pleased you like my poem. I love using words that creates strong pictures in the mind of the reader.

I am always open to suggetions, so if you ave any ideas or suggestions I will be pleased to hear them

I look forward to reading your suggestions

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 29th Jul 2009 19:45

Phil, this is really good. It captures the lack of compassion for the individual in a sustained physically cold and uncaring environment. I like that your imagery uses sight, sound and eclectic realism. The 'Blue Hands' is not clearly explained until the end, which then encapsulates the whole idea with an almost insignificant but smashing simplicity.
If you so desire, I could show you a couple of spelling errors that would lift the tone one step higher.

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