you always wanted more
much more than I could give
more than was reasonable
more than seemed right.
you always wanted more.
you wanted the moon
the stars in the sky
the heart and the soul
of the universe
you always wanted more.
these are the words
you said to me
but none of them are true
I only wanted you
to love me.
Lynn - thank you for clearing that up. I always wondered what a woman wanted. Nice writing.
Rob x
Very female Lynne.
Thank you for your lovely comments, Rose, Phil, Stef and Patricia.
Phil - fortunately, no, it's not autobiographical.
Lynn xxx
<Deleted User> (6895)
Sun 22nd May 2016 23:41
brill stuff Lynn.We loved it.
P&S.xx
The farewell to many a waste of ungrateful takers.... Such a one sided relationship. I hope it wasn't autobiographical.
xxx
Thank yo.
<Deleted User> (9882)
Sun 22nd May 2016 20:43
really nice poem Lynn.Well done!
Rose.x
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Lynn Dye
Wed 25th May 2016 14:56
Thank you, Harry :o)
Rob - thanks for comment. It was really a fictional tale of a one sided relationship, but I expect it's how women in that situation would see it. x